+1 to that idea. Your fit and finish shows real promise, no fault there. Design elements are subjective and those are not the fault either, but there are some minimum criteria that have to be there.
A razor must be a working tool. All the elements that make it a tool must be present, or it is not a capable tool. It must be capable of shaving. It must be capable of being honed by the end user. Or by one of the pro's who will be even more critical if the blade is not a ready tool. If it's not heat treated it will not be efficient at either of the first or second criteria. Third it must, for lack of a better concept, feel good in the hand, the ergonomic part. If it is missing features that are required or has features that interfere with it's function, like the shoulder (as one example), it will not meet the second criteria. Any early error compounds the later errors.
Solve the problem of what the basic criteria of the tool are 100% of the time (needs work), and then apply your skills (accomplished) to making it look good. There are many knife-like, sword-like bladed objects out there that look good but do not meet the basic requirement of a functional tool first. You have the rest of your life to practice making lots of blades and satisfying the tool and aesthetics of being a maker. I would not hang my reputation on the first, or second blades. Make a 1,000. Listen to the feedback from folks who will use these razors as tools. Adaptation equals survival.