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12-08-2011, 11:56 PM
Thread: An Imaginary Chat with Max
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Windchase, that is an excellent point. Still the...
Windchase, that is an excellent point. Still the writing has to be strong to stand on its own. If you notice, I rarely use adverbs, and keep my adjectives to a limit. Adverbs contribute to lame...
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12-08-2011, 02:47 PM
Thread: An Imaginary Chat with Max
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Hello Wintchase, Thanks for the kind remarks. I...
Hello Wintchase,
Thanks for the kind remarks. I enjoyed writing that. Max, my grandson, is a remarkable little boy, who loves giving hugs. Ours is a hugging family. Also, at this age, he uses... -
12-07-2011, 09:23 PM
Thread: An Imaginary Chat with Max
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An Imaginary Chat with Max
Do you love me, Poppy?
More than anything in the world, Max.
Why?
Because I love beautiful things.
Am I beautiful?
You're my grandson and you are beautiful.
Are those beautiful?
What, the...
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