Thread: I won!!

So whipped dog had a competition that involved writing a story about scaring someone. Here's what I won. I'm so excited to use it.

Congrats. You know it looks good when it makes you want to shave.

Luis

Congratulations on your score! Do we get to hear the winning story or do we need to wait for whipped dog?

Let me start this story by saying that I'm a paramedic and am always dealing with sickness and death.* You become kind of numb to things everyday people would find traumatizing. An example like the task of taking a body to the morgue, becomes just another part of the job.* That is until one day at work a brand new emt had her first shift on the ambulance.* Having known that this was her very first ambulance job and knowing she would be at work we had everything in place. Before she arrived to work me and another paramedic started up an ambulance and had it positioned to roll out of the ambulance bay. We opened up a fresh body bag and unfolded it. I layed down inside it and my friend zipped me up. He secured me and the body bag to the stretcher and I began to control my breathing and lay as still as possible.* When the new emt arrived my friend told her that the previous crew had responded to a horrific car accident. Since it was during shift change it would be better if they went home and let her take the body to the morgue.* From inside the body bag I hear the ambulance doors open and shut and hear her sit down next to me. From inside only darkness and that chemical smell of plastic like you get from an inflatable pool toy. I feel my friend put the truck in drive and him start making small talk with the newbie. After about what seemed like 10 minutes had passed and I could hear the newbie getting more comfortable with her surroundings, I unzip the bag and start bucking about on the stretcher.* The look of sheer horror and the blood curdling scream she let out was priceless.* She literally tried to climb up the wall in the ambulance.* It took her a long time to get over that experience.

That is priceless! I bet you had to watch your back for awhile after that

Haha yeah I really did.

That was a good one!

Too funny. You better watch your back big time for awhile.

You are almost as evil as I am, sir. There is a place for you in the Order of the Sith.

Well done!!
Remember pay backs are %*#$!!

Ray