Thread: Dovo Razor Ad

Ok, so it isn't an actual Dovo ad, but something that I did for a class a few weeks ago. It is a "double truck" ad, which is the sort of ad you see in magazines where they take up both sides. Anyway, I figured you would all get a kick out of it. I don't really believe that Dovo is the best you can get. I just put it in there because it was an ad. I figured you all might get a kick out of it. I downed the size from the original so it would download faster, but the text is a little hard to read now. If you would like to see a bigger version, then you can go here. Anyway, enjoy.

Matt

Well done, Matt. Very professional looking with a classy design/layout. Congrats!

Originally Posted by steve

Well done, Matt. Very professional looking with a classy design/layout. Congrats!

Thanks Steve. I repaired the link to the bigger one. Not sure why the jpg had errors, but it works now.

Did they dock you marks for your grammatical mistakes?

"Nothing gets a closer shave ... " should read:
"Nothing gives a closer shave ..."

"What was once consider "obsolete" ... "should read:
"What was once considered "obsolete" ... "

" ... a closer and longer lasting shave then a multi-bladed ..." should read:
" ... a closer and longer lasting shave than a multi-bladed ..."

"You can't go better than with a Dovo" seems a bit clumsy, and " ... guaranteed to smooth out your face ... " is downright unsettling.

I won't comment on the prissy powder blue choice .. oh wait ... I already did.

Thanks for sharing.

X

Hey, whaddayaknow! Another spelling/grammar pedant, like me! Glad I'm not alone X. Though my excuse is it's my job... yours?

Originally Posted by majurey

Hey, whaddayaknow! Another spelling/grammar pedant, like me! Glad I'm not alone X. Though my excuse is it's my job... yours?

Perfectionist I guess.

X

PS Shouldn't there be a comma after "alone"?

Originally Posted by xman

Did they dock you marks for your grammatical mistakes?

"Nothing gets a closer shave ... " should read:
"Nothing gives a closer shave ..."

"What was once consider "obsolete" ... "should read:
"What was once considered "obsolete" ... "

" ... a closer and longer lasting shave then a multi-bladed ..." should read:
" ... a closer and longer lasting shave than a multi-bladed ..."

"You can't go better than with a Dovo" seems a bit clumsy, and " ... guaranteed to smooth out your face ... " is downright unsettling.

I won't comment on the prissy powder blue choice .. oh wait ... I already did.

Thanks for sharing.

X

Jesus X, you are one mean jelly bean.

Mark

P.S. I think your cape is on a little crooked.