Did they dock you marks for your grammatical mistakes?
"Nothing gets a closer shave ... " should read:
"Nothing
gives a closer shave ..."
"What was once consider "obsolete" ... "should read:
"What was once
considered "obsolete" ... "
" ... a closer and longer lasting shave then a multi-bladed ..." should read:
" ... a closer and longer lasting shave
than a multi-bladed ..."
"You can't go better than with a Dovo" seems a bit clumsy, and " ... guaranteed to smooth out your face ... " is downright unsettling.
I won't comment on the prissy powder blue choice .. oh wait ... I already did.
Thanks for sharing.
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