Thread: In All Seriousness...

In all seriousness, I've been writing bits of stuff for maybe 15 years now (very few bits) but I enjoy it. This last poem I really like. I myself like all my poems, but they're probably in reality shit. I wouldn't mind your honest opinion; like, don't care, or dis-like?

Show me your best
Show me your best and your best and your adulations
Show me your soft brushes kissing faces
Show me your nation's young steel makers and wine makers
Show me your university students
With satchels and youth
Show me your houses filled with scents and feelings and food
Show me all the houses of the voluptuous wine serpents as well
The scuttles full to overflowing
Show me all your dissertations
All the studied and worked upon ones
The ones that classify, judge and segregate
Show me all your segregations
Show me all your strength and truth and justice and right
But hide from me your wrong.