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    Smile Espionage and other such bits and remnants of a childs mind...

    My oldest wrote a short story that I wish to share with everyone here.
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    Did I mention that he is eight years of age?

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    Pretty cool. Maybe the next Ian Fleming.

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    Something about it reminds me of the psychological simulation/test they have the kids play in Ender's Game. Pretty darned good for an eight-year old!

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    i think we may have the makings of another Matt Helm(Dean Martin) or another James Bond(Sean Connery)...either way, he is a pretty smart young man. i would be very proud of him.

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    Lovely. I hope he sticks with it. I can already see an extremely complex map in his imagination, peeking out from behind the limitations of a young child's language. Though he is already doing quite well for his age.

    May his linguistic adventures continue for many moons to come!

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    MistressNomad,

    By all means...Don't discouage him. Let those creative juices keep flowing.

    A suggestion...Buy your son a composition book or two. These can be found in any stationary supply or university book store--even online at Amazon.com. They are filled with blank pages. He can use the composition book as a journal or diary to record his random thoughts as well as creative pieces like the one you shared with us. Who knows? Perhaps one day he will be in a creative writing course in college and take one of his earlier thoughts, ideas from his journal and transform them into a short story or a novel.

    Take care...
    "Age is an issue of mind over matter. If you don't mind, it doesn't matter." Mark Twain

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    Ha ha, not my son, but a very good idea you have! I always carry a notebook. Sometimes it goes untouched for a while, but all of sudden I get hit with an idea and it's right there.

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    Very good, indeed! You gotta love the imaginations of kids.

    Does he read a lot of adventure books? One book I really liked as a kid was "Boy's Life" by Robert McCammon. It's an adventure/coming-of-age/mystery story your son might enjoy. I think it's usually read in middle school, but something tells me he can handle it.

    Keep up the good work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by BingoBango View Post
    Very good, indeed! You gotta love the imaginations of kids.

    Does he read a lot of adventure books? One book I really liked as a kid was "Boy's Life" by Robert McCammon. It's an adventure/coming-of-age/mystery story your son might enjoy. I think it's usually read in middle school, but something tells me he can handle it.

    Keep up the good work!
    He devours the Harry Potter books. Takes him a couple of days to finish one then he starts all over again.
    I got him Jules Verne's 20,000 leagues under the sea but I think that was just a little much for him at this point.

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