Good morning Gents

I am attaching for your consideration a short video of my honing technique so you can tell me what is wrong and how can be improve, I must say this is my second attempt and the video show just the last passes with clean water over a small coticule using dilucote process.
I know is too much to ask for a first timer but I am using the resource that I have at hand.
The razor is a Rudolf Schmitd Bambola 205 and the hone is a Belgium coticule/BBW after many passes over a heavy slurry I started to add water thirty passes each time, diluting and more thirty passes until clean water and no pressure on the blade.
I achieved a decent edge enough to cut arm hair effortlessly, I do not have any experience (not even seen one in person) with a shave ready razor to compare with all I have is the humongous amount of information provided by this community and some imagination to try to implement it.
Please let me know what do you see and think


https://youtu.be/0_HEz-F8IUc