Michael,
Love the engraving quality but for me there's too much text (trying too hard, like some limited edition pens?)....
Why not something like:
Wade and Butcher
Irontusk
(Arrow logo)
RWL 34 Stainless
Sweden
The rest could perhaps be mentioned in the box/papers?
Just my 2c, I'll still try and buy the razor if you ignore my suggestions
