Thread: Looking for some constructive criticisim

First, thank you. Second, I think that I need an explanation of the scales being too big. Are you talking in regards to thickness or just over all they look too chunky?

Originally Posted by racenutt68

First, thank you. Second, I think that I need an explanation of the scales being too big. Are you talking in regards to thickness or just over all they look too chunky?

I would say they look to chunky. they somewhat dwarf the blade IMO and could stand to be thinned a little. and i would a agree the pivot pin could be smaller as well. FWIW my taste is to have the blade the focus of the razor and the scales complimenting it but YMMV.

But its a GREAT start!!!! Keep at it and look forward to seeing more!

I have to be honest and say I'm not a big fan - I would say it's obvious that you don't own an actual straight razor from which to base your design.

Looks like you have the ability to make a good razor, but not the knowledge of the details. I also have to say that unless you'd plan to sell them, the only opinion that really matters is yours.

Originally Posted by ats200

I have to be honest and say I'm not a big fan - I would say it's obviously you don't own an actual straight razor from which to base your design.

Looks like you have the ability to make a good razor, but not the knowledge of the details. I also have to say that unless you'd plan to sell them, the only opinion that really matters is yours.

What would you say makes it obvious that I do not own an actual straight razor? You stated that my design seems a little off, what about it is out of the norm? Or would you say that something does not appear that functional? Be as blunt as you wish, please.

hard to tell exactly but it seems like there is absolutely no tapering and no defined spine or shoulder. I also think the tang is a little thin on the second razor which doesn't look bad but might be weird when stropping.

Is the razor in CF scales full edge with no hollow at all? How does that hone? I have attempted to hone one that was full wedge (a kamisori) and it was impossible to do, it would stick to the stones like crazy.

Okay. The following is just my opinion:

- Imo the tangs are a bit thin.
- The first design has too many straight lines. They look almost like rulers.
- With the curvy one, I'd say it look 'off' because you have a very straight edge with a very curvy spine. Imo those two options don't go well together.
- The pin of the wedge in the fiberglass scales should go in the middle imo. Having it so far at the bottom looks a bit weird, and the wedge might move over time.

I do agree what has been said about the details - however, I must say I do like the profiling of the first razor a lot. The hollowing is nice, even and clean, and it is well polished. The second might be similar, but it's hard to tell with no front picture. The most important thing about the razor, and the most difficult, is the grinding of the blade. The other parts are important, but with a little studying you'll get them right. Keep it up, I think those are great first razors.

Oh, the scales - they should actually bend a little, outwards. The wedge will make them curl put a little, provided they are thin enough to flex a little. It makes the design much classier, and also holds an important function.

Nothing to add that hasn't been said, other than in terms of build quality, they look excellent, I especially love the minimalism and simplicity of the first blade, and also the vibe of the scales need refinement. That is all. Excellent job!