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05-22-2016, 01:25 AM #11
Looks nice and does have a professional feel. Just a couple of minor suggestions. On the "home" landing page I would not repeat my tag line in the large central message area. I'd leave the tag line below the company name and come up with another message for the central area. Also further down in the text I'd remove the "focus" wording at the beginning of the last sentence. It's a little repetitive as "focused" is in the previous sentence as well. Last suggestion on the "Our Vision" landing page I'd remove the link to the "Our Vision" landing page or use it for something else.
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