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Thread: 'I Saw At First the Light'

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    Day broke golden and clean with all the birds mentioning it, from the magpie to the rooster.
    I saw at first the light and the lack of light.
    I saw the truck and the car and the lady dog walker as I transitioned from house to car.
    I saw the look on the face of the cop with the speed gun,
    (I am unsure if he saw my face).
    I saw a crow hovering almost still over a small eucalypt.
    I saw the creek that I thought would be dry still water-full.
    I saw the rocks I want to climb just sitting there being rocks.
    I saw a guy with a sign saying Stop on one side and Slow on the other waving to me and wondered why he waved to me.
    Maybe he wanted to feel included?
    I saw the broken down car with the wheels removed, up on bricks, looking almost representative of cars with stolen wheels.
    Representing them all for a cause.
    I saw all those clouds,
    all of them,
    lording it over us all,
    as if they're special.
    As if they are special

    (a carl poem)
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    Thanks for sharing that. I am just finishing a breakfast coffee and grapefruit and you gave me a new perspective on my coming day.
    Bob

    "God is a Havana smoker. I have seen his gray clouds" Gainsburg

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