I too am new to honing. Started on film and am getting stones now. The link on "Second try at honing" really made a difference in my understanding. When it says that you should not see any light on the edge of the blade (looking straight at the bevel) it means NO light. Any glow at all needs to be honed more.

The razor looks like a good one. I haven't modified any heals yet, but keep the heel/shoulder off the stone.

Sounds like you are on the right path.