I'm looking for an honest, critique and or opinions on what I did wrong, how to improve the things I did do wrong? What to do to correct any mistakes etc. Any comments and advice would be very helpful and give me an idea what to do correctly in the future. Not fishing for pats on the back, just some feedback to help me along.

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