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Thread: Another Carl Poem...
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06-30-2014, 01:45 AM #61
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06-30-2014, 02:19 AM #62
He filters?
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06-30-2014, 02:30 AM #63
Please tell me Carl is not a Bruce???
"Don't be stubborn. You are missing out."
I rest my case.
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06-30-2014, 03:32 AM #64
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Thanked: 983Nah. Bruce is his drinking mate down at the pub.
Mick
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06-30-2014, 04:00 AM #65
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06-30-2014, 04:06 AM #66
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06-30-2014, 09:12 AM #67
Just received my invitation to my 50th school reunion[emoji33]. Wait, You'll knew he's really gone then.
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06-30-2014, 10:33 AM #68
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Thanked: 485Yes, you're are quite right. It's of course just a poem, and not necessarily about me. The idea just popped in to my head as I lay in bed the other night and then the next day I just jotted it down. I know my poems aren't that good, but i do like how I just write them, there are very few words I change. i think for this one there was maybe two or three words that got changed.
And Mick, you're right too, or are you? I'm not sure, maybe I should ask my parents?Stranger, if you passing meet me and desire to speak to me, why should you not speak to me? And why should I not speak to you?
Walt Whitman
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07-03-2014, 03:31 AM #69
Hey Carl check out my idea here!
http://straightrazorpalace.com/finer...ml#post1360745
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08-03-2014, 11:19 AM #70
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Thanked: 485Earth Bound
Put on some Tool while travelling on the bus through the fog in the morning light; maybe Lataralus, maybe 10,000 days.
Loud.
Look at the light.
Coming through the mist; over the pond, lighting the road.
Sneer at the person entering the bus.
Sneer at them.
Sneer.
A good sneer in the morning is worth
maybe two shots of espresso.
Look up at the rocks beside the freeway and want to climb them.
Climb them in your mind
and climb out of your seat on the bus and yourself and follow
your soul.
So
who is Earth bound?
Not me...
I'm free.Last edited by carlmaloschneider; 08-03-2014 at 11:31 AM.
Stranger, if you passing meet me and desire to speak to me, why should you not speak to me? And why should I not speak to you?
Walt Whitman